Word Vomit (Week 11)

                          Today I'm going to share my work in our impromptu story or what we call word vomit in our class. Last time whenever we do word vomit,  we will create a story based on random words but this week we worked on constructing based on a picture. So here is my word vomit story for this week:

It was a beautiful sunny day but not until something was occuring in the ocean. The ocean started to make a big and heavy waves. It is not an ordinary waves. They are the waves that are forming and are bigger than a person. It is enough to take down a tall building. But not everyone is aware of happening. These big waves are silent killer. The disaster was onto them without them knowing. The black and furious skies were like agreeing to the waves eating the city. The waves finally reached the land forms. These giant waves washed off beautiful man-made structures. The silence is now broken. Cries, sobs, screams are everywhere.
“Tsunamiiiiiiiiiiii” scream of a woman in a business suit who saw a tsunami coming over their place.
“Evacuate everybody!” said the other employee.
Now you can’t understand what they scream for due to inaudible words coming out when they yell.
You can see the panic in their eyes.The thing that they think of is that this is the end of the world, the end of their life. Everybody rushed up to exit the building and it causes a stampede. Many did die because of the stampede.
 The other people in the other city where the tsunami is just coming over, you can see the awe in their eyes but frightened too. They immediately move and go to a higher and safe place to save themselves. Children, adults, men, women, everyone will be affected by this phenomenon.
   
                              I am learning how to write a story of what I can see to a picture. I know that my work is not yet enough because I didn't reach my goal but I will try my best to improve my work.