Tuesday, 23 October 2018
Show, Don't Tell
As the breeze caresses my face, your fragrance unifies
Slowly, I lift my gaze to you and I feel something cries
It was my heart that is complaining
Drops of bliss, it's raining.
Chorus:
This is how it goes, like a river flows
Your love is never ending
And for me, it is a great blessing
My heart is always yours
The loud thud my heart makes
Of when the existence of yours and mine
Meet and collide
Together create a bond and they embrace
What emotion of the character in the poem conveys?
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